The Pangs of Separation

November 24, 2010 at 2:54 pm 4 comments

She could feel her heart beating faster,

The pangs of separation had begun to rise within,

When she felt its effect on her,

She let herself free to get immersed in what gave her pleasure like love of her lover would,

It was pitter -patter of raindrops that soaked her skin and touched her soul!


PS: I was given the word ‘rain’ to write a 55er and this one came about. It was written a few months back and published on Ginger Chai… Next post hopefully will be a story thats been in my mind for a while now.


Entry filed under: 55 words & no more.

Encounter ( Part II) Alarm Bells…

4 Comments Add your own

  • 1. snowleopard  |  November 24, 2010 at 2:58 pm

    And in this weather she caught a cold
    Was shivering in a blanket with a hot water bottle in hold. 😛

    • 2. delhizen  |  November 24, 2010 at 3:17 pm

      It is not cold across the world!! remember.

  • 3. Nrupen  |  November 26, 2010 at 7:22 pm


    • 4. delhizen  |  November 26, 2010 at 7:24 pm

      you liked it so much? Thanks 🙂 and yeah welcome to the taxfreethoughts


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